poetry open house (everyone come make a poem about any thing and post it )

ha guys you dont have to but ive been seeing allot of poetry lately and wont to here some of yours if you guys can make one up it could be short long i dont care it can be about any thing love something you like any thing as long as it a poem does not have to rhyme just remember to add a title before writing so go ahaed write and post poetry right here i will post one very soon and thank you for doing this oh you can also comment on poetry if you wont enjoy

world so cold...

the hearts
the emotions
the fools
the commotions
all fall in line

like darts perishing hearts
blades cutting grades
schools having fools

they all fall i n line
in a world so cold
in a world so bold
yet so lonely and one is told
he is not loved so his soul is soled

have you ever felt this?
do you ever fell into an abyss
so dark and cold inside
that's what the world is
that's what the worlds made up
of and is...

i suck at poetry so i won't blame if this one sucks lol
ill come with better stuff another time

ok that poem was awesome man wat are you saying you do not suck this was amazing i love it

i got one
how to kill

sneak and run
cut his tongue
prepare to attack
watch your back
kill him before he inhales
take his body don't leave a trail
cops are coming you got to bail
take his body throw it in the ocean
wait a witness approaches
take out your gun shoot him twice
in the chest he falls down let him rest
take his body throw it down then i run
because im done

there you go i no it's random but its something so wat you think

WOW AWESOME YOU MAID THIS UP YOUR SELF I GIVE IT 4/5

its not good but its not bad i give it a 3/5

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